During our Media Studies lesson we were asked to evaluate our classmates music videos, making notes and telling them ways to improve and things that they are doing well. Four different groups watched our music video 'Raindrops' and they made notes for us also.
When my group and I read through the feedback, we could see that we had received mixed views of positive and negative feedback. We were told that our mise-en-scene was very interesting in our music video as the house that we used works well with our music and genre. We were also told that the costume our artist is wearing matches her look and fits the part perfectly. Although our video was enjoyed by many people, we were told that some of the editing scenes were a bit jumpy, noticeable and that we needed to sync the visuals with the music more effectively, as some scenes were out of sync. Another negative comment was that our artist did not seem very confidant which makes her less believable as the singer because she did not have alot of passion whilst singing in some of the scenes .
Thankfully, we were given an extra week to make improvements on our final product. As a group we read through all the comments and listened thoroughly, insuring that we continued to edit, making changes at every scene that was required to be improved.
Mariam Nikpour
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